Wednesday, March 21, 2012

fourteen

Fourteen, fourteen is the number when childhood is gone
One like the leaves of a tree, the only difference is that we can't
Undo all the mistakes we have done
Relive again, life doesn't  end, it keeps going so make the best of it
Then just like drake said to the world  “you only live once”
Everyone having problems life, health are most common
Even people bombing, like fat man dropped on japan by Americans
Never give up, live life & what drake said its one piece of what's limited because your spirit stay living just like Jesus in the sky.
fourteen :)

8 comments:

  1. i like how you used figurative language

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  2. Thats cool how drake inspired you to write some of the things in there

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  3. Awesome. I really felt like this piece did a great job of putting 14 into words....it can be complicated :)

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  4. Great story Jhonny it was awesome in how you refered to Drake

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  5. Wow nice poem , what made you come up with that topic ?

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