ELA writing

One out of many blog posts that it think I worked hard on and showed growth from the start of the year. Is the story genetic mutations , in the start of the year it was really hard for me to reaserch information on computers and break down things to small sentences.
Also I learned to find the most important information and stay on the main topic & instead of just using simple words I used vocabulary so I could make it more interesting. Like another story I wrote i hate vegetables!!! :l
for that story I put as much detail as I could to make the person see an image once they would read it. One of the first storys that I first worked on and I trien putting up detail and thought into was the story the time i got almost killed by a bull :0 , It took me a long time to explain it because it was a long time ago and to bring back what was years ago was pretty tough for me. Although one I tried putting in as much descripsion as possible. I thought to myself I achived what I wanted :)

i hate vegetables!!! :l

        Did you ever get mad when you where a little boy and your parents told you to eat your vegetables and you would just put a big sad face and say no with an attitude.Know I did but all they would do is say its healthy for me because I would grow big and strong. Well ,my parents did the most mean thing that any parent can do just to make you eat them...do you wanna know how she did it?

   It was 2004, the year of my childhood. I was six years old & I was over at my friends house.  His mom invited me to his birthday party and I was playing toy cars that his grandpa gave him as a present. I stayed there for hours till my mom came to pick me up

A couple hours into the party and my mommy came for me screaming my name out, which was so embarrassing.  After some minutes it just got annoying so I grabbed her from the hand and she took me home. Athough right when we got home she already had food prepared and we were about to eat smashed potatoes & enchiladas, when I saw my plate my eyes brightened with excitement to dig in. I grabbed a spoon and put as much as I could in my mouth & when I was done,she starred at me with a funny smile that I couldn't think of saying that she had something bad to tell me & I was right, she asked me with a sweet voice that made me shiver “now for your vegetables”...right after she said that my hopes for ice cream where over.

    Although she did something really different this time, she brought her laptop and said “people that don't eat their vegetables look like this in the future”...I starred at it for  period of time then went crieng to my room. I was terrified because she showed me a picture of a massive man that was inexplicably over weight, I felt like my life was over because of all those times I denied eating my vegetables. So from that day until I was ten years old I have been terrified of that picture. But I still eat my fruits and vegetables because I know they are good for you and and it will be good for your body in the future. :)