One out of many blog posts that it think I worked hard on and showed growth from the start of the year. Is the story genetic mutations , in the start of the year it was really hard for me to reaserch information on computers and break down things to small sentences.
Also I learned to find the most important information and stay on the main topic & instead of just using simple words I used vocabulary so I could make it more interesting. Like another story I wrote i hate vegetables!!! :l
for that story I put as much detail as I could to make the person see an image once they would read it. One of the first storys that I first worked on and I trien putting up detail and thought into was the story the time i got almost killed by a bull :0 , It took me a long time to explain it because it was a long time ago and to bring back what was years ago was pretty tough for me. Although one I tried putting in as much descripsion as possible. I thought to myself I achived what I wanted :)
G'day Jhonny,
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Hey! I love your blog! You are a great writer! I hope that you will have the time to visit my blog and leave a comment on it! The address is http://Clairebrhes.edublogs.org/. Thanks!
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